Essay That Got Me Into Boston University stanford supplemental essays

Today I am a little bit nervous I’m writing college paper. I don’t know why I held my computer cuz I’m actually gonna be reading it from.
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I will definitely do all I can to help those who’s applying to college applying to Boston University admissions anybody. I’m going to be reading my essay typer to you guys today just so you can get an idea of what essays or colleges, in general, are looking for so I haven’t been able to find my college essay for a really long time after I submitted it checked all my emails.

I asked people to check their emails and nobody could find it and I was really freaking out because. I would have one draft I had to bring out my old high school computer you authorize me you know you know how much of a problem this thing it brought me to the home screen and asked for my password and I was like okay yeah it should be easy but it wasn’t opening and then all of a sudden this memory came to my mind that the laptop lost. I had brought it there and they gave me a customized password that’s really random and I remember the password and it worked and I found my essay but yeah in general colleges when they’re looking at the Kommandant essay they want to see who you are and they want to know what your voice is and this can be done basically by telling a story and it can be pretty much any story as long as you stay within some parameters it’s like creative writing you can do anything this is my promise the year that

The Komen off essay obviously this is a little bit weird because it’s my personal writing and something that you don’t see. I feel like anything that is helpful to anybody that’s applying to college especially Boston University you can kind of see what they’re maybe looking for what they were looking for and just give you an idea of what you can do here options and I’m very nervous because I haven’t read this in a while I know I’m gonna be very critical of myself okay so here we go the moon made me cry once it was an experience. I might never forget and one still trying to fully grasp it all started when we were on our way to visit my grandma that assisted living home that she had recently moved into barring new carpets lamps towels sheets and more moving at our short journey the navy blue sky lit up by a myriad of sprinkled stars was the first thing that caught my attention that night one by one the white specks winked at me as if trying to start a conversation.

Smiled back at the thought of being able to communicate with a distant celestial body there was a certain transparency in the air much like the feeling of Christmas when one can instinctively feel the joy and happiness all around as my mom turned the steering wheel the reflection of the street lights with the side of her shoes perfectly we were almost there I tried to slow the motion of the fast-moving trees as we drove by what it turns out squinting really hard at something doesn’t do much except make your eyes so instead. I imagine that with every blink to the moment was permanently captured just like a camera the moving images embedded themselves in my mind becoming retrievable. Ever wanted to and then from the corner of my eye I caught it them say I ate with my head up and there was beautiful infinite the men growing up I have never been extremely expressive or communicated. I can recall many instances in which my dad was happy express yourself tell us how you felt that I was never entirely able to do so accordingly. I was completely taken aback when I felt tears streaming uncontrollably down my face why was I a 17 year old girl who had barely had enough time to make sense of herself as her cry about a big white object in the sky later on I came to realize that this experience my identity.

The moon’s effect on me revealed that is not only okay but vital to express emotion part of me believes that this moment was a release of all the swore feelings I’ve kept inside triggered by the my moment with the moon gave rise to new meaning in my life and presented me one purpose it’s powerful aura has inspired me to want to replicate the feeling I felt so that others can likewise experience through my passion of filmmaking I want to evoke the same feeling from an audience that the movie votes from empowering my audience to feel and express themselves in the way that I was coming that’s my statistics homework helper about time management. I think it’s super cool to see how you once wrote and how your change as a need someone to write my essay because I know I’ve definitely changed as a writer. I were to write this same essay with the same idea in my mind now I would write it totally different but this was that I say that I submitted to Boston University it was a story a personal story that I returned into a bigger moment in a bigger picture and I really feel that I showed and expressed my voice in this essay if you guys have any questions about the college common app or the college essay topic ideas if you’re on the right track feel free to leave it in the comments below I will try to get back to you and give you the best I said I can I hope this video was helpful and that’s all for today. I will be posting a lot of college videos in upcoming weeks because I go back to school.